Writing goal setting 2017

In Te Maunga we have been learning to take care of our own learning. First we have been doing our WRITING goals. I need to focus on my ideas and leveling up on it.
 I did well with explaining what I need to do next and why I needed to do it, what I didn't do well was how much time it took to finish this.
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	Surface Features			Deeper Features
	Spelling	Punctuation	Sentence Structure	Vocabulary	Idea	Structure	Organisation
Where am I? copy and paste the definition from above	R5	R6	R4	R4	R4	R5	R4
	I spell all essential list words correctly. and spell some difficult words using my knowledge of spelling rules.	I carefully choose the punctuation I use to help with the meaning of my writing and correctly use a wide range of punctuation.	I use a variety of words and phrases to add detail and I choose words to make people want to read my writing.	I use a variety of words and phrases to add detail and I choose words to make people want to read my writing.	My ideas are on the topic and are beginning to show some complexity. (Personal Voice)	I have selected an appropriate purpose and format for my audience, and use appropriate language features.	I put my ideas in order or groups and am attempting paragraphs. I use clear pronouns.
How do I know? Give some examples from your writing of why you think you are in that box	On my spelling list I had a few challenging  words but I got through them. E.g : Beautiful Encourage Route	I think I am R6 because I use most punctuation like Brackets, full stops, commas,question marks and capital letters.	I think I am an R4 because I didn’t really think about my sentence structure that well when I had written my 5 complex sentences.	I think I am an R4 because I used similes, I used adjectives, I used good metaphors and I also used different words than the ones I have already written down.	I think I am an  R4 because I don’t write Complex sentences while noticing them while I write and I don’t go very well with coming up with idea’s.		I do not organise my stories I write before I start writing them.
What next? What are your next learning steps?	By giving myself harder words each week ( Words That are list 10 )	I will keep writing stories with lots of speech marks and question marks.	I think I could do better with thinking about my complex sentences when I write a story.	I think I should use more interesting words when I write my stories.	I think I should try to come up  with more ideas before I start writing.		I think I should organise my paragraphs better.

As you can see, this is my wring learning plan.↑